词位置错误，应颠倒过来。4) 人称与全文不统一，应改为you.5) 处错误较多，部分地方充满了中式英语的思维，而且有的句式比较破碎，表达上也不太清楚。6) 处使用Love is all around us 就能... loving us. It can make us happy all the life.Love is all around us. Where is the love in your life ……

't understandThey don't understand usNothing can stop this, not now I love youThey're not gonna get us... a promiseYou and me, let's just be honestWe're gonna run, nothing can stop usEven the night that falls all ……

(手势) or a kind word. It is all around, if you just look for it.Give love, for in giving it you... for the beauty around you – in nature, in others, in yourself – and believe in the love of friends ……

IT'S in the air, it's all around, and it's all you need. It, of course, is love... that love, and not greed, money or selfishness, is what motivates us.That narrator, it turns out ……

的) with them. Just like them, we all have to grow up. But our love for the people around us will always stay... to grow up. But our love for the people around us will always stay with us.This cartoon is about love ……

, so when they see us again next time, they will love us and recognize the people they are leaving... attitude with pets, so when they see us again next time, they will love us and recognize the people ……

All the rageA:I love your new wristband. It looks very cool.B:Thanks. They’re all the rage back home in the US.All the rage: very fashionable or stylish ……

We are weaned (使放弃) from our timidity (胆怯)In the flush (冲洗) of love’s lightwe dare be braveAnd suddenly we seethat love costs all we areand will ever be.Yet it is only lovewhich sets us free. By Maya ……

, when the teacher stepped into the classroom, we set offballoons(气球) around her. She said: "Thank you all. I love you." We saw tears in her eyes. The teacher and us talked about memories of the class ……

around us all love the main character Ball! I’m sure we will be successful.By Chi Xianchen, The Second ……

Serena Williams AFP  Many see Serena Williams the greatest female tennis player of all timeMany see Serena Williams the greatest female tennis player of all time“网球女王”小威宣布退役“网球女王”小威 ……

A: I love your new MP3 player, it's very cool.B: Thanks, they're all the rage back home in the US.------------------all the rage: 风靡一时，流行一时。 ……

Many people around the world would love to become a US citizen, but a recent report showed that in the past year, more than 5,000 Americans gave up their citizenship. Many of them are natural-born US ……

songs are all about her own experiences or those of someone around her. They are songs about...Ella Mai is the first British artist to reach the top of the US R&B chart in 26 years.Last summer ……

Century and let your loved one see it! Write to us at love@21stcentury.com.cn, with what you want to say about love. But, don't get too carried away, a few sentences are all we need. And remember to put ……